Don't hate me! I love Kags as much as the next person, but this just sort of what came out.
In case you can't tell, she's supposed to be lying in a puddle. Why?.....Good question.
EDIT: used the computer to touch it up a little, and to darken the legs (which are still hard to see -_-) And also! I know that her shirt is all wrong. Just bear with me, alright?
Nice job! Although maybe her hair could be a little longer and 'puffer', but nice art work never-the-less! (makes me kinda sad though cause kagome is one of my favortie female characters)
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Sesshomaru: May I ask what are you doing with this Sesshomaru's chocolates?
Starscream: *mouth full of chocolate* NOTHING! I was just checking to make sure they weren't posioned thats all.......
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Her hair coud be a little longer, but don't listen to Night-Blizzard about puffyness. If she's in a puddle it would only be logical that her hair would be wet, therefore, no puff. And her shirt, to me, looks like it's made out of playdough or something similar, probably because white clothing is supposed to be see through when it's wet, so it not being see through makes it look like it's not cloth. And I think the thing that goes around her neck might be a little small. Oh, and try putting just a teensy bit more blood around the wounds if you ever do a picture like this again, to me it looks like there's not enough for those to be fatal wounds. Hope I don't sound rude, it's just that the thingy says 'advanced critique encouraged', so I'm trying to critique advanced-ly.
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Sesshomaru: May I ask what are you doing with this Sesshomaru's chocolates?
Starscream: *mouth full of chocolate* NOTHING! I was just checking to make sure they weren't posioned thats all.......
Naraku:..Idiot
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Three may keep a secret (if two of them are dead)
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Sesshomaru: May I ask what are you doing with this Sesshomaru's chocolates?
Starscream: *mouth full of chocolate* NOTHING! I was just checking to make sure they weren't posioned thats all.......
Naraku:..Idiot
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Kira, one who has darkness.
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Hey! Here's an idea for a death pently! Ok here's what ya do. Ya dip a guy in brown gravy and lock him in a small room with a wolverine who's high on angel dust!! There's one guy who's not going to be f***ing with too many kids at the bus stop from on
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If you think Edward Elric would look good in a thong, copy paste this into your sig. =^-^=
Nice picture.
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